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Thursday 21 May 2020

rafting writing

Story Starter…
White Water Rafting
Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs

Instructions
Use the photo above to write a story about how you survived in whitewater rafting. 

Ideas to use
Times: Before hoping inside the raft.  During the rushing waters. After the raft maneuvered .
Feelings: heart pounding, soaked to the skin, keep your head above water, man overboard, fear of the unknown
Things: Raft, helmet, life-jacket, paddle, boots, turbulent waters, dangerous drops, 
Places: roars of the rapids, boulders, fast moving waters, crushing waves, 
People: Rafter guide,  
Verbs: Paddle, maneuver, overboard, soaked, 

Start Writing below



“Are you coming or not?” she/he demanded as she/he took a few steps further into the raft the countdown came down slowly she was terrified she was thinking it’s her countdown to death. 3….. 2….. 1…… go the raft was released into the speeding river ahhh she went. The raft had something suspicious. It was acid, and it started crawling into the raft. The raft exploded making a popped sound so everybody on the raft was sinking. Then the girl found an idea she says they should move sideways while the current is pushing them so they can go to land. They did it and they made it out alive and they never went rafting again.


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