fixing sentences

WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing

WALT write a range of correct sentence types 

During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a
volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played
volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave
the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.

Read this simple recount.

What do you notice about the recount?

There were to much we’s there

What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?

Put i in the first we

Edit this recount above to make it more detailed:During the holiday, I went to the
beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. I asked a family if we
could borrow their volleyball. Then we played volleyball for about an hour then had
some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I
had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.

life's a stage writing

on the first day of school room 10 did a life's a stage we had to do words about the stage i did he matrix the blue ones are mine.

most dangerous task 4

Today we did another dangerous writing task this was my one.


Once there was a Girl I forgot the name but she went somewhere that somewhere was the Zoo, she looked at a lot of stuff. there was a Zebra, a Lion, a Rhinos, Pigs and parrots, the Parrot started to talk to the little girl and the girl said hello. The Parrot said "hello" back to her the Parrot started to fly around for no reason. then it landed on the little Girl's head. the Girl screamed so loud that the lions started running towards the little Girl then he ate her, the end.


my ending was bad.

multiplication grid 2

Times tables Grid

X	1	2	3	4	5	6	7	8	9	10
1	1	2	3	4	5	6	7	8	9	10
2	2	4	6	8	10	12	14	16	18	20
3	3	6	9	12	15	18	21	24	27	30
4	4	8	12	16	20	24	28	32	36	40
5	5	10	15	20	25	30	35	40	45	50
6	6	12	18	24	30	36	42	48	54	60
7	7	14	21	28	35	42	49	56	63	70
8	8	16	24	32	40	48	56	64	72	80
9	9	18	27	36	45	54	63	72	81	90
10	10	20	30	40	50	60	70	80	90	100

nets and shapes

dmic blogpost 2 week 8

                             this dmic was all about three numbers and you get an equation and an answer

term 3 animation