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Thursday, 27 October 2016

Narrative writing

One sunny day in the desert there lived a Hunter named Kristoper. One day the Hunter saw a stranger. Next the stranger got a snake and used it as a nasty whip. Then the Hunter was poisoned from the snake. After that there was a person named William,he saw the terrific Hunter poisoned. Then William gave the Hunter medicine. Finally the splendid Hunter was alive. After that the stranger whipped himself with the snake and no one gave him medicine.

1 comment:

  1. hi Chaun im Abbie-lee from Blaketown school I like the way you wrote your story but next time you could write a bit more.

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